Wow.This is quite deep and philosophical yet emotional and meaningful.A great piece.With each poem you only become better.You are one of the few who can truly relate to the pain and melancholy yet retain the hope and capacity for love.You are a poetress of the highest degree.I am always touched by your work, as a kindred soul.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Oh I swear I just felt a tear escape. I cantotally relate to your precious words here.

Dang!!! Girl, you got a lot said in this
most realistic written word of how we
treat each other now days.
The last two stanzas I liked the best
but overall, the write is a work of art.
Good job well done and Write On,
Bogie

Well i am a young poet but this i can see that this poem was written with such fantastic elegance, so yeah great poem, and if you have any tips please e-mail me, cooper04@hotmail.co.uk

All i can say is very nice work it blew me away

Great poetry!!! 5/5!!

♥ tabitha