This was written well and you express the pain of lostr love nicely. Overall I enjoyed reading it. However I think it could have ended sooner and some of your stronger stanzas towards the end would make a strong ending - for me it becomes a bit over long. The flow was good and the rhyme was consistent although a couple of the lines were a bit long.

Very sad to lose a love,all your left with are memories and what might have beens. i liked the poem,it was a bit long but so are griefs.5

This is a pretty dang good poem. I love how you can put all of your emotion into words. Your vocabulary can use a little help, but it doesn't really matter. I love it how it is, and you should too. I love this stanza the best:

I pretend that I've moved on
But really I am lying
I'm smiling on the outside
But inside I'm still dying.

Excellent

5/5

5/5. Even this was kind of long it was full of emotion. I just loved it. It felt the pain within and the strongness of how sorry you really were. But admittance saying you did miss him.

-Summer

I luv this poem and i really like how u express urself and put ur emotionz into wordz keep up the good work

This is one of my favorites. I really like this poem. Reading it made me feels apart of it if you know what I mean? I really felt what you were saying. Excellent and well written!!

This poem was very heartfelt.. I felt the flow to be off in the first stanza.. I think it would flow a little better by adding a word in each of the last lines.. something like...

I haven't thought of You in months
But suddenly you're in my thoughts
Once again I am reminded of all
The pain that You have brought

The rest of it was very good. It was sad and full of emotion.. I enjoyed reading this.. well done 5/5 xx

Wow, long, but a good read.

The flow was notably better in this poem, as well as word choice. A couple of the rhymes seem forced, but they still work fairly well.

You really expressed your point well, nice work!

.. i am begining to think that i will love every one of your poems ... i felt this one was also written about me and what i went through and still trying to get over check out my poem (What are you living for ??) it is my expression of who i loved and lost hope you enjoy ...

Once again another simply amazing poem! i honestly cant find anything bad about any of your poems,they are all so wonderful!=]