Awww, I love this poem! You always put so much emotion in your poems, and what you are completely feeling! I love it! Oh and yeah, maybe we could chat sometime, that would be great! I would love to be able to talk...if you would like my e-mail just let me know and I will give it to you. I can send you my picture if you would like? Just let me know...kk? But if I send you my picture you have to send me yours...*smile* Well, I'll talk to you later okay!? Buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

"Do not pretend you don't listen
Your God so do something!! "

Fab ending! Really really good poem, it had an almost desperate tone to it.
Well done hun!
5/5
*Gem*

Hunny. Oh hunny. I know how you feel and sometimes that sign wont come. sometimes that angel never shows but hunny if you have faith then.. eventually you wont need that sign you'll just know. also although it seems like punishment right now... its not. Sometimes God has to break us down to get us to listen. I'm so sorry hunny I wish I could help... I dont remember what book but in the old testament there is a story about a man and he goes to the top of a mountain and theres a tornado, an earthquake and it rains fire or something like that and in all that the man searches for God and he couldnt find him and then it was still and there was God. Sometimes... we have to expirience all this crap before we're ready to hear those words God has to speak.. but I have full faith that God is not punishing you... he loves you! Hes probably carrying you right now. Just take a minute and listen in the silence. maybe he'll say something maybe not. I dont know. Im sorry hunny!

Another tremendours piece. You honestly blow me away. I know the feeling when it feels as though the whole world is against you and almost as if God is picking on you. Maybe you need to expierance this pain to help others. For it will only make you stronger, so that they can then lean on you. You do seem to truely care about people and you would not be punished for that.

I like this verse, i think it shows the absolute desperation.

'So what the hell do i do?
Just give me a sign,
Send an angel to guide my way,
Or take away my life.'

Take care, but another truely great piece of writing.

Kelly
xx

Amazing! the emotions sticks real deep. ur sooo talented. it would be a gr8 song:)

Okay well, that last comment was really long...sorry about that....um, I haven't been able to change my e-mail yet so if you wanna send me an e-mail Feel Free! I will be shutting it down shortly though...but we can chat for now....kk? well....ttyl lots of love....
Lila

Aww I loved this poem, I feel like that alot! And if I didn't thank you already thank you for commenting on one of my last poems. Your a truly great writer! 5/5