Comments : Your Puppet.

  • 17 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    I thought it was never good.
    I felt the emotion.
    It was beautiful.
    I love your work like alwys.
    Lovce you
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew

    Superb, amazing, truely wonderful. But enough about you, this is another well written poem with another great message. Congratumalations

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    That's amazing, i loved it alot. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    This was great. i love the poems you've wrote, well the ones ive read so far. the rhyming and repition in this one gave it a great flow and ending. i wish i knew how to fix this and give you constructive critism.

    5/5.
    i need to find a poem of yours to pick apart. =]