Thank you for the comments. I enjoyed reading this. Very nicely written. 5/5. I am going to add you to my favorites and look forward to reading some more.

Very Compelling. One can get so many meanings from that poem!

THIS is GOOD. THIS is what coming to this site is all about! This had me gripped from the get-go because, having read some of your other works, I wondered how it was going to end. And you left us on tenterhooks!

This works on so many levels I have to say that it's left the biggest impression on me of any poem I've read this week. I am very impressed. :-)

This is another good poem, i like the story behind it, 5/5!!!! keep it up!!!!

Bryan,

Wonderful! I can't find another word. WEll done. Keep up the great work you're an awesome writer! 5/5
God Bless

~*Tay*~

I really like the way that you described winter in this. Especially the lines:
Catching everything in it's grasps,
As it rolls down mountains like a tidal wave,
Those lines just really stood out to me for some reason. But you did an amazing job on this poem. The second stanza was absolutely beautifully written. I loved it. You really did an amazing job on this poem! 5/5

I liked, but you need more creative words in some places

Survival!
yes everyone should keep fighting. great poem i loved the first lines especially! cool poem!

You should read the book "To Build a Fire," by Jack London. It really redefines your perception of what coldness is.

Sweet another unusual write. I like the way winter is used for bad here as its normally about joy and snowball fights no one really considers the deadly side.

xxx alex xxx (7)

Very nice imagery I liked this poem I think the structure needs some work but otherwise nicely done

Wonderful imagery, the word choice was the best, and I like this the most so far. keep up the good work.

4/5 once again. Sweety, your poems are usually very strong, but these are getting weaker as I go. they are more like stories, rather then heart felt poems. The flow was off at times too. You're a great poet.
(Just keep doing better)

"I am so numb it hurts,"
That line is either really clever or really dumb. Numb means you can't feel anything, yes? So it can't hurt. It's uncomfortable but it doesn't hurt.
Or.
You want a contradiction in there, however I think you need to word it a little better if that is the case because it doesn't seem to make much sense within the poem, as the poem starts off quite literal, not metaphoric.

"I am alone to face the cold,"
I am left alone to face the cold, maybe?

This goes on a lot, about the cold and fighting. And being alone. That's all the poem is with a few extra things added in. I see the Winter as being a metaphor but the rest of the poem seems so basic.

4/5

jess ~

I really enjoyed this, because I find you write like me. More descriptive and less based on the rhymes. It was well written and I quite enjoyed the concept.

Well Done,
5/5
xPaula.