Good job!

I liked this a lot, really gets the reader thinking

Its long, but good.......:)

Good poem! Long but good.

I lyk it,its rili gud:)cnt wait to read more

Your an awesome writer and ur only 14! just think what u wil be in a few years...5\5

Goog i like it u should make a nther one

I like it, made me think for a while though

THANKS 4 THE COMMENT I REALLY AM THANKFUL, AND GLAD U LIKED IT!! :)
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