Awe hun its so sad lol i love it!

Awe hun its so sad lol i love it!

That's really good Jason :) I really liked it.

Aw this is really good
has great meaning
and easy to realate to
keep it up
love u xo

Woo Jason.
nice poem.
I gave a 5.
So, it's excellent.

I LIKED

this is the sweet let down
the words make all fall to the ground
one of the most beautiful sounds causes so much pain
turns the lightest of faces dark
tears even the strongest hearts apart
leaves them to no hope of a new start
^That BIT! :]

Take care,
N-G-C-S.

Very good poem. 5/5

IM LIKE SO GUNNA PRINT THIS OUT!!
i loved it
i raelly did
good job
5/5
damaris
aka
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Wow I do not know what to say you have the gift I wish I could right such beautiful poetry

I love the beat and the way u presented this..great job

lissa

Aww
sad but true and so very well expressed

Very good loved it

I like the way u repeat that one bit very nice.

Wow... thats a powerful poem....

Very powerful and emotional, i can totally relate to the meaning

~Violet~