Comments : My Buttercup

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a good poem, cute, great flow and structure!!!, 5/5!!! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Razorblade Lies

    That is so addorable. I love it!!! How sweet are you!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    Aww that is soooo cute. lol although while reading it I thought of one of my favorite movies the princess bride! You seen it?

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Aww..this was really cute and sad:(.
    I too have a cat that i really love...yeah..the poem was really nice, but the flow was a bit awkward..good job:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Layla

    Aww, that's so sweet, I love cats.

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awwww. That's adorable! Such a cute little poem. I loved it! 5/5 God Bless.

    ~*Tay*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Didn't flow extremely well, nice poem though, quite sweet.
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is such a sweet and cute poem! I really like the way you wrote about your cat.. just because it's different and makes it stand out. I really loved this poem! And the flow and rhtyhm of this was very good.. I really enjoyed reading this piece :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by kelS;

    Awe i liked this one. its cute at first i thought you were talking about a friend so i was a little creeped out
    -haha!. but then i realized it was about your cat. it was goodd. you might want to try a rhyme poem because all of yours i have read are free verse.. just an idea tho! good job. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by playful_wants_elisabeth

    Thats makes me member my kitty dusty, its cute

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    Aww this is a wonderful heart felt write about your cat. Sorry for your lose.

    sadaddy

  • 17 years ago

    by Brook

    =] what a cute poem. unexpected from the title, but still very cute!
    you and your cat must be amazingly close. i can relate!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Very cute., i felt he flow could use.. work. and a few lines were to short but overall very cute. i like how it was aobut ur kitty. i feel the same way about meh puppeh. -bullwrinkle x33- i calleth him bullywrinkles. lol. nvm. but its vute. Good job.

    x3Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Am i done? im not sure. is that the eighth. if it isnt just ell me another u want me to do. and i shall. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Awww. I loved this!
    I once had a cat named buttercup. I wish I coulda wrote a poem like this for her, and HER UNDERSTAND IT! Lolll.
    You did a great job.
    Nice, sweet, and kind. <3
    Keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I seen the title it was in and thought I would try something that I normally don't review, which is friendship poems. I'm really glad I did.

    I liked this poem, it was cute and sweet, but also let you know that sometimes we have to let go of the things we truly love.

    I enjoyed the twist that this poem had as your best friend was a cat, No one would have thought of that. It was really well done and other than a few syllable problems, It was very well done all over.

    I give this a:

    5/5