Great poem.5/5

You make me understand it cuz its your feelings, 10/10 aido!!! :)

Hi aido its me!I mean its becky, I changed my name to Miss Becky, you like? :)

I wish pain would not follow us into the next life....

So sad and heart-aching,i like this

Seconds pass but feel like years,
Waiting for death to engulf her in its warm hands.

Keep it up
See ya
Laura