Hey I like this poem, nice thorts,
and oh btw your quote the stranger one,
wth?
that's not a quote honey, lol
but it is interesting anyway, maybe you might want to go fix it up make it a quote like for instince...
"What was this stranger saying to me? although I don't know what he meant, I know that we all will when they feel the pain he does" or something like that, but I mean, Don't forget in a quote you have to make it about everyone, you have to involve the people. For it has to reflect them as well as you...
but anyway hideho, good job chap,
lol, I am so tripping hehe,
anyway have a look at my poems, lol, thanks if you do,
keep the good work up,
fire xx

Hey I like this poem, nice thorts,
and oh btw your quote the stranger one,
wth?
that's not a quote honey, lol
but it is interesting anyway, maybe you might want to go fix it up make it a quote like for instince...
"What was this stranger saying to me? although I don't know what he meant, I know that we all will when they feel the pain he does" or something like that, but I mean, Don't forget in a quote you have to make it about everyone, you have to involve the people. For it has to reflect them as well as you...
but anyway hideho, good job chap,
lol, I am so tripping hehe,
anyway have a look at my poems, lol, thanks if you do,
keep the good work up,
fire xx

Oh it repeats soz I wont do it next time... lol
i learnt my lesson, lol
soz.. omg bye
*shys away*

This is so beautiful. i love the imagry of the moon - what a great line. great poem x