Life will get hard to get under control

^^ Don't use "get" twice, it doesn't sound too good

Don't let life go cause of someone.

^^ I don't think you should use "cause" it sounds kind of tacky

I didn't like this one as much as I felt it didn't flow as well or the you used great detail and vocabulary. So it can be improved in those areas. 4/5

Another great poem by you, you have a unique style which is one of the best, keep up the great work like always. 5/5

Great message i really enjoyed reading this x

Awesome poem. A very true poem. I loved it. Keep up the great work.5/5