I think this poem is different from anything else i read, and you have a great point, i really like ur vocab choices....5/5

Wow. That was a very deep and emotional write. Very good poem though. Keep up the great work. Thank you so much for the comments!
5/5 God Bless

~*Tay*~

This poem was Great!
Good job, the last stanza was my favourite!
5/5
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I really liked some of the rhymes, although some of them seemed off. The first stana, the flow was not very good, but it picked up as the poem went on. The word 'retrospective' sort of throws off the flow. Yes, I know, you want to show us your wide vocabulary, but there are too many syllables in that word, and it alters the flow. However, the poem was still overall.. Good.

I really liked this poem.. I think that the flow was very good and held up very well. I thought that you had some beautifully imagery in this, as well as a dark and creepy story behind it. I especially liked the last stanza.. it kind of sums the whole poem together and ends it very nicely, it was probably the stanza that stood out to me the most. Amazing job on this! 5/5 keep it up!

Great poem. it has great vocab. i liked this poem alot:)

I really liked this...I enjoyed the wording immensly, you have real talent for it.

My favourite part was the last stanza, it blew me away it was so powerful.

Probably one of the best poems I've read on here. good job.

Your poem is not at all giving any inclination to showing off. It is a gloreous poem that in its own way describes ones self. Very good poem.

It not bad at all and I like the way it all fits togther.

*its'*
i believe should be
*its*

*Then said aloud
Twisted and trapped*

said by what? by who?

Sorry, just my confusion. I am kinda... critical.

*He is robbed
Of all he has known*

I think it would sound much better like this:

*He is robbed
Of all he ever has known*

Well written, hard to discern.
Good job.

5/5
~Stephen White
(yellowfeverlime)

This poem really REALLY moved me. It was soo sad! Again, your word choice is spectacular! Where do you get your ideas and inspiration?? Because I wish I could write like you... really. I love it. :)

Really good imaginery and creativity
And write a hopeful love poem,ok?
I wanna feel love like i feel sadness in you
I'll be waiting for your love poem(i said those cos your imaginery and wording can make a wonderful love poem)i believe in this
Take care of yourself
Just try it and don't take my request too serious,you don't have to,but i mean it could be good
See ya
LAURA

Wow this is a really popular poem isnt it? i can see why....it is creative..and a wide use of vocab..=) 5/5

I think it was brave putting a word in your poem without knowing what it means lol you did a good job I don't know what it means either but the sound of it seems to fit correctly so good job!

Elogantly put, but not showed off. You did an excellent job, and vocab was perfect, anything less wouldn't have done justice to the poem. the words were vivid and inspiring, I don't understand why your rating is so low, this was excellent. truly a 5/5