What a brilliant story and a great poem. 5 from me x

Excellent read I really like the first two
stanzas also being at the end of the write
like ecstasy turned to sorrow bittersweet love
comes and goes.
Job well done and Write On,
Bogie

That is absolutely fantastic!!!! I love it!!! In so many ways I can relate. I like how you used the words "heartache tonight" something about them caught my attention. I really enjoyed reading this poem and Im sure I wil enjoy the rest so I am on my way to check them out.
5/5
keep up the awesome work!

Oh wow, i really enjoyed reading this... very well written, and explained emotionally... excellent work 5/5

I loved how you repeated the first two stanza's at the end, very effective. I thought this was excellent. A beautiful poem, with a sadness flowing throughout.

Awesome work.

Wow what a great poem, you captured a young man's thoughts to a"T", and young lass feeling sad as he goes.
Very Good poem

Very good poem. I really liked it. Keep up the good work.5/5

An amazing poem.. The rhythmn and flow was excellent, and the poem itself quite sad.. Very well written.. Well done 5/5 xx

OMGoodness!! Sarah, I effing loved this!! I love the flow, structure...everything. And i love how you repeated the stanzas...my jeebus!! i don't know what to say!! lol I just loved it!!!!

-Liz