How to describe her

by nick   Nov 26, 2006


Your eyes are beautiful pools of sparkling water,
your scent makes me high,
your hair is like brown locks of silk,
your smile lights up the world,
your voice soothes everyone,
your hands are soft platforms of love,
you in my arms feels right even though your love isn't with me and it hurts. i love you and you don't love me

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  • 19 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    The first 6 lines are beautiful and poetic. Then the ending was a bit rough and sudden. Work on the transition. Keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by princess shoatz

    This poem is sweet if this is based on real life yiu must really love her