Love it, kep up the god job

Aww this is a very loving and warm poem. it made me smile while reading it. its very beautiful. keep up the great writing! 5/5

~Kristina

5/5, personally i think it would have been better it it was a little longer but apart from that keep up the good work!!!

x

This poem was so sweet and I loved how it cover the topic of unexpected love.

"You have found the key,
I tried so hard to hide,"

A guarded heart is easy to break into. ^.^ Keep writing! *5/5*

Alyson

Awww soo short but yet soo sweet lol I really liked the flow.. I was able to sense some emotions from your poem... good job and keep up the good work .. 5/5

''You have found the key,
I tried so hard to hide,''

I love those lines...so beautiful and powerful, and holds so much meaning.
I thought this was beautifully written, flow was good throughout, and the ending has a lot of impact.

Hm . Cliche topics don`t really bug me if the poem works, but there`s seems to be emotion ? that`s lacking . It`s like, I can see the emotion that you`re expressing, but it`s just not there .
It was a bit rocky, but the meaning the poem portrays is sweet .
..__MiNDYY

Although I am not into love poems, you really kept my intrest with this one, it helped that it was short lol The word choice was amazing, simple yet effective, the emtion seemed to be heartfelt, and the flow was great, I can not offer a way to improve this one. 5/5

It's funny how we try and protect our heart and somehow we end up falling in love, fantastic write and great flow. I think most can relate to this poem, I know i can for sure. Nicely done 5/5 GG23

So short but to the point..The explanations were amazing and the flow wasn't off almost everytime
I liked how you state love as stealing hearts
Keep it up,
Laura

Omg, i know how you feel. it was such a beautiful piece. i thought it was amazing it was so meaningful and loving and the way you expressed it into words was just brilliant.

I don't know what the future may hold,
I only hope that we will be together.

^_^ my fave lines, i like the way you expressed this and it is really the truth, you never really know what the future holds but all you can do is work on your future. amazing write definately 5/5

I think that there was heart in this poem, but I wasn't too fond of the way it was conveyed. It all seemed just a bit naive... Though it was innocently beautiful... If I could I'd give it a 4.5... but i can't so 4/5

Ravyn

Hey,
I love, love poems, as i do like this one, The only thing I miss is rhyming, If it would rhyme i think it would be more beautiful then it is now, I think that the second stanza is the best on, i also like the subject of the poem, I think that the last line doesn't completely fit the poem, so I will have to give you 4/5
kisses stephanie

Great poem.
the flow wasnt as good as it maybe could have been, but a great poem over all! well done 5/5!

Love
Jacs
xxx

This is beautiful. I normally don't like poems that don't ryhme, but this is an exception =]

I didn't want it,
I didn't expect it,
You have found the key,
I tried so hard to hide,

This stanza is gorgous!
Kepp up the great work!

_Amber_

I think this is a very good poem, i might be mistaken but in the 10th line there should be a you after so so it read "And now I love you so much", but it is still very good the way it is, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

I liked it, i thought it was short and sweet and to the point. you had a great flow and it was from the heart. the only thing is, i only gave you a 4/5. to me, it was typical, it wasn't unique, and the best writers on here have poems that are about general and typical topics, but they throw something in there that is unique to their style and different. that's what makes the poet. i'm sure in your other poems that is there, it just may not have been this one. but it was an enjoyable read and i thought it was really short, sweet, and cute.

I liked the idea of this poem. I thought that you could have used some more expressive words or put more emotion into it like someone who hadn't loved for so long had suddenly found a new lease on life - but it was a good poem (I dont mind that it didn't rhyme - I like poems that have unique styles to them).

Thanks for the read.

Mo :)

Your lines are so great,.love it,^_^,..5/5

Not a bad write. It seemed more like a note that you would write to your partner as a little suprise, but still held meaning.

I really lacked that WOW factor though. Reading through some of your other works, they have so much meaning; this one is just missing that.

Its nice, its simple. I liked it.