Simple, yet truly heart felt. I can relate, and so can many others. Love is a confusing thing, but when it goes right, it's amazing.. just like this poem :)

What can I say,
You have stolen my heart,
You are the only one,
Who has done that to me,
^^ right off the bat i can relate! so many guys have this affect over girls but don't realize it

I didn't want it,
I didn't expect it,
You have found the key,
I tried so hard to hide,
^^ so many people try to keep protected from everyone and just from life!

You have opened my heart,
And now I love so much,
I don't know what the future may hold,
I only hope that we will be together.
^^ very very hopeful and innocent verse!

i usually dont like free verse but to be honest i enjoyed this one i think you did a great job expressing your feelings and being straight up about it
5/5

Very nice free flow with the emotion that comes from a captured heart expressing romantic gratitude

well done

I feel you could have put more description into this piece. It was a good meaning, very true, as we so often fall in love when we don't want to, the piece was just missing something.

Not your best,
but still enjoyable:)
4/5
xPaula

I enjoy your write but i think you could go way more on a hugh and great subject of love and it's effects. it's merits 4.1/5

This is a cute and simple poem, and i love it. especially because i relate. haha. well anyway, i like the way it is written and my favorite lines are "You have found the key,
I tried so hard to hide". but im not sure how i feel about the ending. the last line kind of doesnt seem to work for me. but then again, thats just me. overall, nice job

Ehhhh, I can't say I was too much of a fan of this poem, it was pretty cliche.. it had meaning to it, yet.. I really was looking for you to be more original with this.. its a short little thought, and I thought you could have expanded it on a lot more than you did here. I get how youre feeling, but dig deeper into your emotions and spill more of you onto the paper.. for us to see. Emotions are key in a poem, and if you portray them nicely and go in depth with them.. you are bound to have a masterpiece.. this poem however.. I saw that you kind of lacked it.. you shortened your emotions up in a really short poem.. it siad something.. but you needed to dig deeper. Make sense?
Hmm. 4/5.

I didn't want it,
I didn't expect it,
You have found the key,
I tried so hard to hide,

i dont know why but this part makes me think
alot of us try to hard to escape from the world
we hide ourselves away so we cant get hurt
this poem inspires me alot
its so beautiful :)

Very nice poem but i agree with above that something was missing

Very good, liked it alot

I love this poem...I love the bit where u wrote

You have opened my heart,
and now love floods my heart.
I don't know what the future may hold,
I only hope that you are in it.

^^
Love dat line
Just beatiful hun
5/5 for sure....