On my mind

by Crystal Redl   Nov 27, 2006


Love is patient
Love is kind
Love is what is
On my mind

I love you and
You love me
So why can�t we
Just meant to be.

We were best friends
But fell in love�
Now of all things
Have come undone.

We don�t trust each other
Enough any more�
Why did we have to�
Fall in love.

In a way I wish
We could still be true
But I know it will end
With a great big blue.

Love is patient
Love is kind
Love is what is
On my mind.

�! DON�T EVER FALL IN LOVE WITH YOUR BEST FRIEND!�

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    I love this one... just keep it on writing more baby...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    This is a really good poem, I loved it!!! Keep up the good work. I give it 5/5

    -Amber-

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Again fix up the script in this. the first stanza caught my attention tho. it was so gripping.

    5/5 David

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