This is a soft written poem... it's beautiful.

Libby

Like it it was short and sweet good job..
-sda-
P.S thanks for the comment on my poem i really appreciate it..

It may be short but it is quite sweet 5/5 xx

Awww thats really sweet=)

I've read several of your other poems and it's great to see what range you have in your writing ability. To go from dark and gloomy to something as simple and elegant as this is definitely a testiment to your character as a person. Great job.

Very nice poem...it was very well written! keep up the great work

Yes short yet perfect. you spaced it out or it would have been really short.

i liked the last line. the rain in the sea.

5/5 David

This is so pretty!
Even though it's so short, I think you did a great job with this!

Very nice! Even though it was short, it still held meaning. I read your profile; amazing that everything you went through, you are still strong. God Bless You! Thanks for the comment!! :)

Ciao~

Very nice. Good imagery. I love your word choices.
Take Care Cindy