Open The Door

by Mousie   Nov 29, 2006


I have to let you in
Or I fear I'll lose your heart,
I cannot let that happen
For with you I will not part.

I said I'd do my best
And ensured my heart was yours,
But how am I now proving this
If I keep locked the door.

I have not tried my hardest
For my heart I must protect,
But no good this will do my life
And alone I will be left.

My heart is in your hands
Because you I can now trust,
I know my love for you is true
It's more than just a lust.

So now I make this promise
That as hard as I can try,
You'll know my every hope and fear
And wipe the tears I cry.

sry guys, i just realized that i had put my explanation in the middle of the poem haha... yes i'm a bit blonde, don't mind me! sry!!! hope you like it!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    You have done another great job my dear. you are amazing. I so love to read your poems as they so touch me.
    great write once again and nothing less than a 5/5 as you really deserve it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, just wow, you a really talented writter, I loved it. The emotion within this poem was fantastic. The flow was outstanding, and the structure was great.

    However, this part,

    "I cannot let that happen
    For with you I will not part."

    The first line in that should either be,
    "I can not let that happen" OR "I can't let that happen"

    The second line, should be, "For with you, I will not part."

    Other than that it was a well written poem. You have talent, keep up the Amazing work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Megan

    Sorry i havent emailed in a while but i did to night. plus i just have to keep up with your fantastic poems i swear if only i as good as you.but completley liked no loved it keep up the good work. love yas girlie

  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverGoneInYourEyes

    Nice feel ya right there very nicely done

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This was a very beautifully written poem with such heartfelt and true emotions. I could relate to the first half of it.. I never got the courage to actually let anyone in. But you did an amazing job on this and I really like how it seems you had an epiphany of letting people in. It defintely gives people, like myself, something to think about. You did a really good job on this! ((P.S. I had already commented on The Music That We Play-I commented on it again too.. sorry & I realized I commented on The Night before I commented on it again. So I am doing this and another instead.. hope you don't mind :) ))

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