Great poem. Relationships and love with some one else are so hard to find all i can do is write about it. But it looks like you have it all figuered out. Love the poem hope you liked mine haha later p.s keep up the good work
Oh wow, this was very beautiful and touching, this angela seems like a wonderful girl. This poem was amazingly well written, I loved the words you used and the description was perfect. Your rhymes were perfect and flowed wonderfully, they did not seem forced at all. I especially liked this line "My heart beats within her chest". Amazing work, keep it up.
I like your poems a lot..That girl is lucky to have a sweet guy like you lol I hope it all works out and thanks for the comment...awsome work keep it up thanks for sending out your amazing talent too ..awsome poem