Comments : Angel-a

  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Pretty romantic...liked it

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Blue Eyed Angel

    Great poem. Relationships and love with some one else are so hard to find all i can do is write about it. But it looks like you have it all figuered out. Love the poem hope you liked mine haha later p.s keep up the good work

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. keep it up. this is a great poem.5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by MidnightKisses

    Awwwww.. that was soo sweet.. it made my heart melt.. keep up the fantastic job!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sarah

    Beautiful poem. ^_^

  • 13 years ago

    by Kristyna

    Awwwwe that was so romantic.
    Keep it it, its great!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Beatiful i really appreciate this poem.. sometimes writing poems help us to show some words that we cant say to someone. nice written and hope angela like it.. thanks for sharing and god bless

  • 13 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Oh wow, this was very beautiful and touching, this angela seems like a wonderful girl. This poem was amazingly well written, I loved the words you used and the description was perfect. Your rhymes were perfect and flowed wonderfully, they did not seem forced at all. I especially liked this line "My heart beats within her chest". Amazing work, keep it up.

    --Steph

  • 13 years ago

    by nicole

    I like your poems a lot..That girl is lucky to have a sweet guy like you lol I hope it all works out and thanks for the comment...awsome work keep it up thanks for sending out your amazing talent too ..awsome poem

  • 13 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    So sweet..jut straight up feeling and the rhymn makes it more affective in this case..wow

    lissa

  • 13 years ago

    by angela

    I love your poem!!!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by angi

    I love it because my name is angela.. i wish someone would have written me this beautiful poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a sweet tribute to the one you love!

  • 13 years ago

    by celi

    Wow... another very sweet, wonderful, amazing poem!!! you should write poetry for living, i'm sure you'll have a big success!!!! ;)
    celi ****

  • 13 years ago

    by Makenzie

    This is soooo sweet, i would give anything for my man to say somehting like that to me! keep up the great work. you have a gift. your way with words is astounding