Comments : Lying Broken On The Floor

  • 17 years ago

    by Matt Dahl

    I love you poem great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Matt Dahl

    I read your poem and I think it was outstanding, keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by JUSTMEXXX

    Good One!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Marina Ung

    Nice =] Go sweety

  • 17 years ago

    by erin

    Not great , your kidding me how could you say that its fantastic!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashlee

    Whoa.i really like this poem =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Phil

    I really liked this poem, keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Bobbi

    I like this poem because I understand where you're coming from. Keep it up!

    ~Bobbi

  • 16 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    No, i disagree with you cuz i thought that poem was good and dhenz..

  • 15 years ago

    by Mackenzie

    Wow. i really like this poem. 5/5.

    keep it up.

    much love,
    mac.<3

  • 15 years ago

    by Tyler Durden

    I've thought about writing like this before, but didnt think I could pull it off.

    You did amazingly. But I think I would have made some of the words stronger. add a phrase or too. Maybe a "WTF are you doing?" kinda thing, where the first stanza is concerned.
    But all else, top notch.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Love Panda

    I like it, something odd about it, even though it aint that good..

    ..i still like it!

    OCTOBER X

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This was awesome.. Nice write. Each stanza was just amazing, and relatable for a lot of people i would imagine. Over all i loved this rite heaps. keep it up. 5/5