I read your poem and I think it was outstanding, keep up the good work!

Ahh! How cute!

Layla, This is stunning.You continue to grow as an excellent poet.I love the repeating stanza of the 'cloud' it really has impact.This is love and heartache at once-but you have coneyed it into such a poem of meaning and beauty.You are truly so gifted as a poet.

Gary Jurechka