I really liked this, you conveyed so much emotion in this piece and it really got to me.
I enjoyed the imagery a lot as well.

"Knowing that his with me,"
I think you should put 'knowing that HE'S with me'
"And forever never fades,"
I think that rhymes a little too much for one phrase and they kinda cancel eachother out so you are left with nothing. and in another stanza you repeated yourself with "forever" and I think you should substitute the first one with something else and leave the other one because of the double rhyme one one line thing.
But i really like the meaning you have bundled up in it so perfectly. It has a great rhythm, just the mistakes kinda threw me off. Sorry if I seem harsh, i really dont mean it like that, im just trying to help.
sincerely
skittles

Thanks for the compliment, and i appreciate it. well, i think ur right and i know that, thanks for the suggestions but i thought i dont need to re-check if there's some mistakes...this is the way i used to write and i need my originality so it doenst matter for me, i just follow what comes in my mind. and what my heart wants to write! once again thanks for reading!

People have downvoted my lyrics "Hold On, Move Along" so I have deleted it and reposted it can you please leave your comment on it again and voted =]
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Wow i am now singing... i like the lyrics . this is so inspiring great job5/5

thank you!

I liked reading this. The flow was swell and it kind of leaves me wondering. Is this angel of yours physically with you or emotionally with you? wonderful writing. 5/

Ok 4th line should be (Knowing that he is with me), still very good, 5/5!!! absolute talent in your poems, so keep it up!!!

Hm.
I'd put this in "Life" under "Religion". But, anyways.

I really liked this. It was very inspirational and full of hope. I just don't know why, but I love that you don't rhyme.
Anyways.
Nicely done, very nice indeed.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Very interesting poem. I don't like topic very much but you wrote this piece greatly. Some lines are really excellent, it deserves 5/5

Great portrying ur angel and its sweet and full of good encouragement to everyone i love it 5/5