Comments : Sunset

  • 14 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Nice imagery and beatiful choice of words. i love the message of this poem keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Very sweet little poem..nice rhyming and good technique:)...well well done:)

  • 14 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I think in the last stanza it should be 'they'll' to make it flow better. But it was a pretty poem with great rhymes and a nice picture. A true appreciation of nature.
    Charisma*

  • 12 years ago

    by DirgeVenustas

    This was good i liked it alot