It was really intersting and i know what you mean by this poems its hard but try to keep your head up..for a tittle you could call it..falling apart..life is not the same...crashing thru the unkown...Rachy

"Escaping now becomes a goal
Not just a fantasy."

I loved those lines. Simply because they were isolated from the rest of the poem, that made them very effective. Overall the poem was very good.

I loved this poem, how bout "loosing battles" or something a long those lines for the title.

Keep it comeing