Comments : Blood And Roses

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. It is so sad. I can some what relate. 5/5 Keep up the good work:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    This was an excellent write!! I'm speachless. I love your use of words...the structure is perfect. But I don't think that matters all that much. Lol. The poem was amazing. And I can somewhat relate to it. I was trying to pick a stanza I like and can relate to the most...but I can't. I loved the whole thing.

    Just one suggestion though...you should cut back on capitalizing the first letter of each word, I'm sure it's something you're already used to...but it was kinda distracting...well at least it was for me. Other than that...beautiful write! =] Keep writing!

    -Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    Besides the burning of my eyes that the capitalization of every word gave me, I found this poem pleasently written.The flow was flawless and the story unfolded at a beautifully sad pace. I like it alot. If you based this piece on your past experience, I'm sorry you had to go through that (um... trigger being a figure-of-speech of course).

    Aken Sol

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    This is prolly one of my favorites of all your work. i really really loved this. felt it to my core. great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    This was deep. Emotions running high.
    I can relate as I have been in a situation like this before although I would not have been able to turn something so ugly into a beautiful masterpiece.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    WOW! Nikki this was amazing. I usually put a line that i especially liked from the poem, but I really couldnt decide for this one! This was so powerful and meaningful, and something I'm sure that pretty much everyone can relate you. This was extremely well writting, you really have talent.

    --Steph

    P.s. Haha im sorry i could think of any constructive critism:P

  • 17 years ago

    by CondescendingHeart

    I absolutly LOVED this poem...
    the begining made it amazing, and i couldnt wait to read the read.
    AMAZING job.

    TheJohnston'
    ( L )

  • 17 years ago

    by Brook

    Umm wow. Im like..speechless. You so have a talent for writing. Its amazing. it flows so well..and just..wow.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Wow that was so powerful and deep. great use of words. great job with this poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mary Rose

    Awww dat wz sad.. but graet poem u got der... i luv d wordings.. keep up d gud work *wink ;)