"captivating their ignorance,"

i love it. The way you use such a beautiful and living thing like the ocean and turn in into this depth full of sadness, was amazing. Beautifully written.

Oh this must be one of the greatest poem I've ever read..
You're so good with words and the way you express things..

This is brilliant. It's very, very well written. Keep up the good work!

Wow. i loved how you ventured into a metaphorical world. maybe you could just use all nature to discrbie misery, without actually saying the word misery. you would lead people into some deep thinking. that would be great. but i liked this poem.

5/5.