by Yesenia Dec 2, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Its like Ive lost my |
by *Charisma*
Well, I wouldn't consider this a poem because it's in paragraph style so my first suggestion is that even if it doesn't rhyme...line it up in stanzas. I hope that's one suggestion to helping you out! |
Wow, this is a very deep poem. I can really relate to it. Keep up the good work. |