Inspiration

by Yesenia   Dec 2, 2006


Its like Ive lost my
inspiration i cant write
poems anymore and
all the ones i do write
suck

when i used to talk
to you and we were
best friends it was easy
for me to write poems the
words just flew into my head
it wasn't difficult but now
everything has changed

ever since i havent talked
to you and sometimes don't
even get to see you its
become more difficult i
sometimes spend hours
writing a poem ever since
i lost you i lost my inspiration
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hi everyone i didnt feel right just asking this so i wrote a poem to go whit it lol can you please vote and comment and can you guys help me i haven't been able to write good poems lately they all suck:( give me some advice on how i can write better thanks byez;)

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Well, I wouldn't consider this a poem because it's in paragraph style so my first suggestion is that even if it doesn't rhyme...line it up in stanzas. I hope that's one suggestion to helping you out!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by ~[Pisang]~[Chives]~

    Wow, this is a very deep poem. I can really relate to it. Keep up the good work.