Comments : Longing for Unspoken Words'

  • Usualy I Don't Like Poets Who Write Way Better Than I Do, But I Guess My Heart Must Be Getting Soft Because I Like You, Everything About This Poem Screams Perfection, I've Struggled To Find a Flaw & You've Made This Poem Flow With Such Percision And Creative Ease, You Make Writing a Poem This Brilliant Look So Easy & I Know Its Not =) I Admire Writers Like You

    5/5 Your Talanted Never Let Anyone Tell You Otherwise xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This was a good poem, and so glad to have it in the contest. The flow as a bit off in the 2nd and last stanza, but I liked it and you use some deep words to express your thoughts!
    #2 comment
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by intoxicated sorrows

    One word 'beautiful'