Forget - Me - Not

by N J Thornton   Dec 2, 2006


Remember us; forget- me- not,
my lips now, liked severed petals.
Blossoms grew with every smile
then, our kisses became the nettles.

Remember us; as glory stems
and nostalgia frames our past.
One sigh, in time, and bittersweet
as memories between are vast.

Remember us; forget- me - not,
and now blossoms another rose.
Yet, as my wounds linger to heal,
Your half of our flower grows.

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  • 18 years ago

    by repair her heart

    I enjoyed this it seemed so how do i say Romeo and Juliet like romantic -sigh-GOOD JOB!!!!keep them coming i enjoy reading ur poems........especially when i am in computers like now with not much to do!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brook

    This is really good--i liked the way you used forget me not in every line. gave it a nice flow. good job, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    It seems like a hopeful sad love poem. Warming, gives me that cozy feeling inside.
    5/5
    ~Stephen

  • 18 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5 excelent.. by now you probably arnt surprised. =p

    liked your unique use of words.

    "Remember us; forget- me - not" --as simple as it was, i really liked it. =]

    w00t for you.

    --linds[[x]]

  • 18 years ago

    by A. M.

    Like this poem

    5/5

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