Broken dream

by XcrissyX   Dec 2, 2006


Siting in silence,
With nothing to do,
Looking back at my mistakes,
The main one was you,
The thought of you haunts me,
It kills me inside,
Its because of what you did,
That makes me sit and hide,
My heart will never be mended,
Living in a broken dream,
Where everything goes wrong,
Where nothing is what it seems,
Although I force a smile,
And wipe my tears away,
I think of when I fell in love,
And regret that very day,
The feeling can not be ignored,
It is far to strong,
But because of this feeling,
Everything goes wrong,
I used to be so stupid,
I fell for your game,
And ever since I did,
Nothings been the same,
A tear rolling down my cheek,
For each breath I ever made,
Gradually my memories,
Start to fade and fade…

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful. a powerful opening, with each stanza thereafter just getting better and better. the only thing i would suggest for this is to change the last line so that you don't use the word fade twice...maybe shrivel and fade? or something along those lines. other than that, i thought this was wonderful.

  • 17 years ago

    by christina

    I agree your poems are great you leave alot of emotion ihn your poems which is a great thing to have alot of poepl like to read this kinda stuff well keep it up
    luv ya,
    Christina

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Your poems are very good....and you have a raw talent. You are good now, and I can't wait to see how your poetry grows with you. It will be even better in just a few months if you keep writing like you are. !!!!
    Charisma*

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