This friendship we've formed

by Katie   Dec 2, 2006


Sometimes when I'm feeling down and blue,
The only person that can help me is you.
You brighten up each and every day,
Your a good listener and you let me have my say.
I love the way you smile and the way you say you care,
I can always depend on you cos I know your always there.
The says we spend with each other drift slowly by,
I hope this happens til the day I die.
Our companionship will never end cos our bond is strong,
We'll never part cos we've been together for so long.
I'll never forget you as i get old,
Both of us have formed a mould.

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  • 19 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    First off, I liked these lines the most.
    I love the way you smile and the way you say you care,
    I can always depend on you cos I know your always there.
    Good job with those.
    Secondly, in your 7th line it reads, "says" Isn't it supposed to be days??? Just a typo I saw.
    And thirdly, lol, I like that it rhymes, and friendship poems are generally sweet, the only thing I didn't like was your last line. I feel it was a little forced and too overused. Just an opinion that you don't have to listen to, but thought I'd throw that out there.
    Charisma*

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