Wow I really loved that..
It's so unique and awsome.. ;)

I like the style of writing very much!

I think I might learn how to do that..

Thnx for commenting mine :D

5/5

This is an amazing poem, it has a really good point to it

I like it! It's kinda weird how it's almost exactly what I'm going through right now. Anyway, I thought the structure was interesting. Although, I thought Haiku poems were supposed to be based about nature. But I like how you wrote this! I'm glad you wrote a whole poem and completed it! Great job!

Good job! You have done a really good job on this poem

Very nice. a few things:

'alot' should be 'a lot.'
These are actually Senryus- a form of Haikus. Haikus are about nature. Senryus are about humans and problems they cause.

But i liked this poem. it was very good. =]

Different flow, because your interesting decision to make a whole poem of stanzas that were actually haikus. I like, though, it turned out well. Impossible Love? Portrayed well! Great job.

Nice message behind the poem.

This is good nice job!!
5/5
*kaila*

I liked this I didnt understand the flow but thats beside the point I once knew was this girl/you were going thru nice job

I really liked this poem. It's strong and flows nicely. I like how you took a bunch of senryus and made one poem. [They're not haikus for the reason Lauren stated above] But call it whatever you want it's nice piece of poetry. :] 5/5

marcella

Hmmm...this was very creative...i'm partial to haiku because i think they're so small and delicate with a whole lot of meaning...i liked the Impossible love theme...great job
Jonda Mullins

Cool poem. It has a strong message in it to me. Don't leave nothing you love. Great job. 5/5
-vino