This is a unique poem but written very nicely i hope ur classic love song plays in your heart forever nice job 5/5
15 years ago
by Lia Jnell
Ok Sisco, when are you going to become quoted as the most amazing poet like ever?! Because tha needs to happen basically right now. Your writings are absolutely fantastic and I really enjoy reading all of your poems.
Words seriously cannot describe your work, everything I have read has taken my breath away, and I really wish that I could write like you.
And we definatly have to start our long deep conversations again, I miss those! You have been an amazing friend to me, and I know that we only talk over the internet, however, you are an amazing person. Any gurl is very lucky to get to be with you. I heart you Sisco, obviously not like crushin or anything, but you are an awesome person!
I'm trying to find the right way to say...How much I loved this poem!! ;P
You have a very unique style of writing and expressing your feelings. The flow did seem just a bit shaky, but all in all the poem was great. Beautiful write!! Never stop writing!! 5/5 Take care,
[[ You commented on my poem "No Longer" on my other account. I don't post poems on that one anymore, so this is the newer account. Thanks for the comment. :) ]]
SOFTLY FLOWING WORDS OF LOVE, TUMBLE IN AND OUT OF EARS, WORDS OF LOVE EVERYONE SO OFTEN SAID, THAT NO ONE EVER HEARS. FOR THIS CLASSIC LOVE SONG, ARE FLOATING THROUGH THE AIR..... THE VERSES OF POETRY...OHH SO HEARTFELT PENNED, YET FLOWED WITHIN BEAUTIFUL EMOTIONS WRITTEN... MARVELLOUS..... ANYWAY THANKS FOR YOUR VISIT ON MY STUFF NOR LEAVE YOUR NICE COMMENT, I VERY APPRECIATED! HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND, TAKE CARE... BERT ~
Sweet poem. Especially liked this line,
"In Gods hands we have placed our love, for only he can give it worth".
I've attempted love poems recently and none of them seem to come out the right way, but this one expresses the feeling perfectly, so I really enjoyed reading it. :)