People have downvoted my lyrics "Hold On, Move Along" so I have deleted it and reposted it can you please leave your comment on it again and voted =]
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Wow...i really like your poems they are very good it make me think about myself....

Everything will be alright,
Everything will be okay.
Hold on, Just hold on,
Another day

i like this line alot because it make me feel like when your down just read this poem and it will make you happy!!!this poem was great keep up the good work!!!!
-teardrop

thank you

Aww....so sweet... i dont usually enjoy reading free verse but this is an exception especially since I can relate to it. Great job! One of your best! 5/5

I loved this poem. I can relate because my boyfriend brock up with me and that is how I feel. 5/5

This poem was abit cliche and a tad bit too short to really reviel any detail...but the wording gave it a very cute sence and made it a nice pleasant read.

I found this very sweet and touching, it made me smile.
I thought the rhymes were sometimes cliche, but apart from that, you did a good job.

Awww.. the way i feel.. 5/5!! even tho i hate my memories!!!