If you were me for a day

by KellynGailen   Dec 4, 2006


I edited this poem...

If you were me for one day ,
you would see how much i like you
and how much i think about you everyday.

You would notice how much i think about
how your thick brown hair covers your eyes or
how you always make me laugh when i am sad.

I would hope u notice how when i was sad
i was really only sad because i am not with you.
You would see how much i cared for you.

But i wonder if I was you for a day if you would feel the same
Would I see that you cared cared for you?
or would you not care at all?

Would I see how much you liked me or
would my heart feel empty again?
just how it felt before but only worse.

Sometimes i wish i could find out but
now maybe i should just ask you,
find out how you feel. and find out the pain to be rejected.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    I really like the idea of this, its really original, gd work!

  • 17 years ago

    by natalia

    Luved this poem so much, made me really think about a guy i know. well done!