Hello again. This is comment number two as far as I know. Unfortunately (and yet, it is infact Fortunate) I found nothing wrong with this poem. Funny poems are so hard to write, and I've personally found that makin' them funny enough to even draw a smile is relatively hard. However, you picked a subject that (again) that I'm sure everyone can relate to, and you definatley put a smile on my face.
Freakin' alarm clocks. lol.
'That Dreaded Beep' is like the grown-ups closet monster... It strikes fear. :| . Hehehe.
Anyway, I really don't think there's anything more you can do to this. I really enjoyed it. I'm impressed to finally see a funny poem that works. :)

HaHa this is so true. I'm only in high school but I work in the summer. It sounds like you do it every day of ur life. Keep up the nice rhymes.

Stay Playa,
SC

I can relate to this poem as most im sure can.... great job !!!

OMG thats how i feel every morning when i have to get up at 5:45am for school. I CANT WAIT UNTIL IM OUT so i can at least sleep in a little bit. My alarm sucks you turn it off before it goes off and it still goes off.LOL. you did a great job.

Haha so true i bash the s-hit out of my glock lol but ur right no matter how hard u hit it the next day it always beeps haha nice 5/5

This is great...and so true. I've even had dreams about that dreaded alarm clock only to wake up to it's sound! You did a good job with this one!

Love it, Love it, Love it, Love it and just for good measure i love it some more! What fab poem! I hate my alarm clock with a passion. It is so hard to get up in the morning i am just so sleepy and its even harder when its winter and dark in the mornings plus i know i have no where nice to go - just got to work *sigh*

Kelly
xx

That is way too perfect. I totally agree with everything you said. Waaay too funny! And yet so sad, b/c it's true,lol. Great job!
~Midnight Sun

Just what I needed before going to bed! Very good write! First time I will be going to sleep with a smile in a long time! Thank you! Excellent!

I love this poem, it's awesome!