This is great goran, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

A true feelings from a true person.

Great poem 5/5 keep it up.

Very unique and creeative write.
Nice messege behind it.
I really enjoy this one!
Great work keep it up!
God Bless 5/5
Thank you very much for the comments! They ment alot!

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God i love your poems, it was so nice, i really liked it, you have such a unique approach to things. wonderful job 5/5

Wow i love how its writen and it flows so beautifully

I love how you switched almost every stanza from "here" to "there." I love your work. 5/5