Your the one i blame for all my pain
by Kelso Dec 4, 2006
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Your the one i blame for all my pain if you were there with me to you would understand. i was there when you cried and i would wipe away all your tears when you screamed i\'d fight away all of your fears and i held your hand through all of them years but where were you when i really needed you to help me? these wounds just wont seem to heal but if you were here to help me they would and thats why i blame you for all my pain ... |
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17 years ago
Nice job.. I liked it girl.. do more of them so i can read them :P.. anyways it was awsome 5/5
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17 years ago
by true lover
THAT WAS SOOOO GOOD!! I CAN TOTALLY RELATE!! GREAT JOB!!
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17 years ago
This is really good, though its not really original. Almost the enitre thing is from the song Immortal by Evanescense. I'm sorry, but you pretty much copied this enitre thing except for like 3 lines. Try something more original. You are pretty good though. You can certainly flow well. Good luck
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17 years ago
by caz
This one makes me feel ur pain and i understand u cpmpletely i feel the same way :( caz xx
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17 years ago
I like this one a lot it expresses a lot of feeling
~amanda~
