Comments : This Burning Bridge

  • 12 years ago

    by Kristina

    Awww =[ wow this is amazingly sad. made me cry. wonderful job on it 5/5


  • 12 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, excellent write, I enjoyed it. The flow as well as the structure in this poem was outstanding. I loved your word choice and the Rhyming was good. Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 12 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    The beginning of the poem was ok and then it got so much better as it went along

    your an amazing writer (im sure you dont need me to tell you that, but it's the truth)

    an adoring fan =P
    brittany (MD)

  • 12 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    excellent poem, i really love the second stanza, the rhyming is perfect as well as the flow 5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • 12 years ago

    by Startle Me

    When I read the first line
    I felt that it was kind of force.
    I thought I had mistaken
    But once I read the second line
    I felt the same way.
    But the third stanza
    "You know I know"
    It's beautiful.
    So "poetic"

  • 12 years ago

    by Sasha

    Nicley written

  • 11 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    Wow you are an ahmazing writer!
    theres such good rhythm in ur poems.
    You have real talent.