Awww =[ wow this is amazingly sad. made me cry. wonderful job on it 5/5

~Kristina

Wow, excellent write, I enjoyed it. The flow as well as the structure in this poem was outstanding. I loved your word choice and the Rhyming was good. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

The beginning of the poem was ok and then it got so much better as it went along

your an amazing writer (im sure you dont need me to tell you that, but it's the truth)

an adoring fan =P
brittany (MD)

Hey,
excellent poem, i really love the second stanza, the rhyming is perfect as well as the flow 5/5
kisses stephanie

When I read the first line
I felt that it was kind of force.
I thought I had mistaken
But once I read the second line
I felt the same way.
But the third stanza
"You know I know"
It's beautiful.
So "poetic"
Lol.

Nicley written

Wow you are an ahmazing writer!
theres such good rhythm in ur poems.
You have real talent.