This is so ... dark. I love it. I think the only thing you could do better is puncuation. commas and periods... and on this line:
So I won't again cut my wrists"
-Maybe put So I won't cut my wrists." i just thought that line was too long.
You did an amazing job! Your rhyming was mind blowning! You did a really great job on the timeing too. I usually choose which lines/stanzas I love the best, but on this i cannot choose! You did a great job!
Oh my satan! Thats such a good poem, since it's been my dream for a very long time for that to happen to me. The poem was perfect, eveything in it I really loved! I love your writing style it's absolutly darling! I really liked it! You keep writing and I'll keep reading. Really loved it!