Comments : Dark eyes... red eyelashes [quatern]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow. This was really great. I love the effect your words have on me. They just left me in awe. Your vocabulary was great and the form you used really made this poem great. The descriptions, imagery, flow, and everything else was great. Nice job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cooper

    Good. Good good good. It rhymed, it flowed, and you used some words which were very....thoughtful, for lack of a better phrase.
    Format suits you well, and I advise you to keep writing such graceful poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very good poem. Very vivid imagery. I admire the format....good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    O. i like theimage this poem creates. nice depth.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Nice job on this form. Good imagery!

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment for contest:

    You did so good with this...the imagry was just great and I really enjoyed reading it! :) Keep it up!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by MissAlotta

    Very mysterious yet beautifully written. Superb Job.~Tina 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Well writen, your refrain was exelent, brought me back to the poem when it began to shake a little.

  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    Wowwwwwwwwwwwwww.
    i love this poem.
    its just so well written!!!
    beautiful.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Excellent form. I like your word choice and the imagery. Beautiful dark poem!