Comments : Not Even A Simple Smile

  • 13 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    I like this poem a lot... you are really good, keep up the good work...

  • 13 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    How I wish you'd open your eyes
    How I wish it's me you'd see

    I felt that that wasn`t exactly the best choice to repeat the 'How I wish' but other than that, it`s a well written poem . Many can relate, and it held meaning .
    Well done(:
    ..__MiNDYY