Its rele great ... and ur rele goood ... keep it up ...

I love this poem
it really made me think,and i enjoyed reading it. your work is brilliant,you shouldnt think different
im interested in reading some more
keep up the great work!

This poem is different and it really makes u think thats the sign of a good poem 5/5

Yes this poem could be alil above some people but thats the thing its different and a matter a fact really good

Erm...? what can i say! it's very sad n i love your contrast of words! it goes together so beautifully!

Wow i really liked this poem! the words you used were outstanding!

Oh abominable memories
You haunt me, besiege me,
Petrify me...
Yet you are a part of me.

that was my favorite... besiege, petrify, so much emotion, i really loved it absolute 5/5!

Wow.........I don't really know what else to say. It was beautiful and I loved it. *5/5*

Alyson

Wow, i really thought that this poem was excellent. way 2 go, keep on writing, 5/5

You know, when i see a poem set out like this, i think of "no rhyme scheme", "short lines", "no flow". And i was right again this time. But i actually liked it, my friend. I thought it was powerful, very sad and really well written. there was a flow, and it wasn't perfect but i really enjoyed this poem.
well done, my friend
xxxx

I think it was very brave (and clever) of you to use and even repeat a word so difficult to say to convey how inevitable memories are.
I personally wasn't too keen on the second stanza, simply because I tend to think words like "bottomless," "nothingness," and "black" in a poem of this subject are a tad cliche.
I did however, enjoy the rest of the poem very much, especially the ending stanza.
Thanks for sharing.

Wow.. I absolutely loved this poem. The words that you used to described everything was beautiful and well thought out. I love the whole idea of the poem, mainly because I can relate to it. The flow of this was practically flawless and really held up well. And I really liked the last stanza. It was just very nicely worded. Beautiful, sad write. 5/5

Deep poem. Love the word usage, and the free-verse like flow. Good write.
It wasn't too sentimental though?... if i may be contradicting myself, i apologize, but it was deep but not a 'memorable' deep.
Keep writing!
5/5
~Stevie

Wow, I feel the same way, whenever I think back on bad things in my life... great peomQ

I love this poem. Great depth and its sad. But its really good! Keep on writing!!!!

~Shae

Love this poem. I'm a new ready to your poems. I never knew that a poem could be deep. Mine arn't really deep. this is B-E-A-utiful.
From your Friendly Neiborhood Poet
Aaron

So sad...so beautifully written.
I loved the imagery used in this.

Mm...id hate to leave a oneliner, but i dont no what to say. it was a well written poem.

i guess now it isnt a oneliner...

Wow its so strongly worded its great well done x x x