It's a good poem but the flow seems a bit weird, looks more like a little note so 4/5 sorry!!!

Wow, now this was an excellent poem u have written, i to want 2 be in a pro soccer team 1 day, 5/5

Great poem!
5/5
~Stevie

Nice job, though it feels more like prose. You could make it more poetic and flowing if you used less complete sentences (LoL, my english teacher would kill for saying that) Keep it up

I love this poem. My faverit sport has alway been dancing.

That's a great dream. It use to be mine long ago, but with problem effecting my lungs, I was never able to play a full game without getting extremely tired. I had short breath, but I played striker, and very good at it might I add. Anyways, really nice poem, inspiring.

I can tell you really love the sport, and i think you will make it if you put your heart into it, 5/5 on the poem!!!

This is a great inspirational poem! I love it!

Wow, this is another wonderful poem by you, you are so great.
keep up the great job as i am sure there are many ppl here who love to read your poetry.nothing less than a 5/5 as you really deserve it.

This was another great poem, that you have written. I love all your poems 5/5

Your title:
It's supposed to be "Put Your Heart Into It."
That's why I couldn't find it. :P

Put your heart [[into]]

[[You have a dream.
I have a dream,]]
You said "you" in the first four lines.
Change it.
It just seems... awkward.
Maybe you can change it into

Dream
For I have a dream

Honestly?
When I read that it was about soccer...
I was a bit shocked.
In all my days of grading, I have never read anyone write about their favorite sport.

I'm glad that this is important to you, m'dear.
For I, too, have a sport that I'm in love with.
Hopefully I go to tournaments, I don't need to one.
I'd be just glad to know that I'm able to go.

This wonderful, wonderful poem.
Deserves a wonderful five :]