Comments : Courtney's Tears Of The Sky

  • 17 years ago

    by AhmadAfaneh

    Wow!! nice poem ... gud writtin.. full of emotions and actions .. omg i just love it.
    well at last all dat i wanna say is dat dont lose the hope in finding her because u will. just stay strong and follow ur heart.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Mirrorinmg the face of a mother
    ^^ Spelling?

    The sun shown down with rain in absence,
    But in the presence of light the youth struggles.
    Rapids crash over bodies of the lost.
    The water erodes the lies,
    ^^ I really really like this

    Ash, this poem is great, andyour A/n made my heart burst for you. I wish you the best of luck in your sreach =]

    if you need anything the bowl is there for you