Comments : His Dark Angel

  • 16 years ago

    by AGirlWorthFightingFor

    A icy blue stare
    Cold
    As ice
    Is all he can be
    A bloodless face
    And white winter wings.

    I like the mystery established in this opening stanza.
    Would've liked to have seen that carry through the rest of the poem.
    in description
    "show, don't tell"