Yeh it does great little poem keep it up man.

OMG! That was soooo coool!!! hahaha. This was so good!! I had to read it a few times to understand the WHOLE thing. And it was just amazing!! This is one of my favorite poems by you. I loved it!! I'm bouta go read it again! lol. Keep writing!! 5/5

-Poetess

Wow, that's really good. You're an awesome poet.

That is an awsome poem i love it