by jessica Dec 7, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
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Friends share adventures, |
by Laura
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I think you should create more stanzas for it its a good start keep up the work |
by *Charisma*
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Umm...i really think you should make this longer and expound upon your thoughts. I mean it's cute, but it lacks the depth or feeling most poems carry. So my suggestion is to make it longer... |