This is beautifully written I loved it thanks for your comment on "Death Angel

Aww wow this is really sad. it brought tears to me eyes =[. but you did a wonderful job on writing it. it was full with so much emotion. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

Another great poem by you, you are just so great, keep up the perfect job like always.

Awh this poem is so sad but you are an amazing writer! keep up the good work!

Very sad!
i could feel the hurt he was feeling and the hurt she was feeling... you put all that in the poem... really good...
keep it up!

Awww this poem is so sad he has no idea that he hurt her badly with that i feel bad for her this was a great poem 5/5

Omg, this was soo sad. i really really felt the characters pain. this is brilliant hun. my fave of yours so far.
much love and many kisses,
bex